Im wirting an essay about nutrition and health but im nt happy wif my first couple ov sentences- can any1 help?
Posted by admin on Jan 29, 2010
Ive tried a number of beginings but im not happy with any of them! Oh, duz anyone know any gud websites for finding out abut nutrition affecting health…apart from the obvious (doh, rcn etc) Thanx alot
I think your beginnings might sound better if you tried to use actual English.
And in order to learn, properly, I suggest you don’t get ideas from other people and choose one of your own.
How can you learn if you use someone elses material?
I think your beginnings might sound better if you tried to use actual English.
And in order to learn, properly, I suggest you don’t get ideas from other people and choose one of your own.
How can you learn if you use someone elses material?
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Start by getting a dictionary, and I’m sure you will be fine with the rest….
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How can we help if we don’t see them? We’re not writing them for you.
Also, a big problem might be your spelling and grammar — it’s atrocious! If your sentences are as bad as your question, I can understand why you don’t like them.
This site might have some information to help you:
http://www.usa.gov/Citizen/Topics/Health/Food.shtml
This site will help with the fundamentals of writing an essay:
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/
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Poepel as don’t have no idea wots’ rihgt for what makes there boddies grow good are lible to get thin or fat or both, like, ya now.You hav ta eat diffrant stuff in the rihgt amounts ta keep helfy an controal ya mataberlizem.
http://www.mcdonalds.com/corp/about/factsheets.html
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