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Everyone has different kinds of favorite drinks. Some don’t care much of drinking or living a healthy life. On the other hand others stay alert for how many calories or sugars a drink contains. For example, Tea and Coffee seem to be the number one choice of drink. But have you ever thought of which is healthier?
First of all, both Coffee and Tea help you warm up and stay awake. But thinking about the risks of drinking coffee, can be very serious. Even though it helps you stay awake all day, by drinking it regularly can lead to cancer and other health problems. Also differing from Tea, many of the chemicals in Coffee and decaf irritate the stomach lining and causing an increase of stomach acid, leading to digestive disorders.
Secondly, Tea is also a major effect to your body, but in a positive way. One way Tea is a better alternate drink to choose from is because it has been shown to offer substantial benefits, in such diverse areas as cancer preventing, anti-aging, and weight loss. Another fact why Tea is a wiser choice, because unlike Coffee, Tea helps our brain to focus very effectively, by gently raising our level of awareness and perception.

Lastly, Tea and Coffee can both bring positive results in its own ways. Both Tea and Coffee are drinks that are recommended to stay on focus, and are drinks that can be drank in the mornings to keep you going through the rest of the day. Coffee and Tea are also both very addictive and effective.
Overall, even though Coffee and Tea seem to be very much alike, they are also very different .First, because Coffee may lead to cancer, but Tea cures it. Secondly, Tea helps you live a full and happier life, but Coffee is more likely to shorten your life by being accused of heart disease or cancer.

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